From manuscript to masterpiece.

Bespoke editing for fiction writers – specialist in crime, suspense and thriller.

With nearly a decade of experience in commercial publishing, working with household names as well as debut indie authors, I offer expertise in developmental editing, line-level edits, and proofreading for authors who want to hook readers – and keep them on the edge of their seats until the very last page.
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Hi, I'm Rebecca 👋

Stories help us make sense of the world — and the best ones stay with us long after the final page.

As an editor, I work with authors to craft gripping fiction that keeps readers hooked, while staying true to their voice. Whether you're revising a first draft or refining a final manuscript, I offer clear, actionable feedback to shape sharp, immersive stories that leave a lasting impression.

Supportive, honest feedback tailored to your voice — to help make your story the best it can be.

Trusted by publishers:

Recommended by writers:

I’ve got an amazing editor who pretty much taught me to write novels […] I’m eternally grateful to Rebecca […] She basically drilled [all the bad habits of being a screenwriter] out of me gently, and held my hand through the first book. I’ve used her ever since.”
Simon McCleave
Bestselling crime novelist
"I’ve worked with a lot of editors over the years, and Rebecca is up there with the very best. In fact, I’m not sure I’ve ever had such detailed, insightful notes that just made everything so much better. Her feedback left me inspired, energized and confident in what I needed to do next and all the 5 star reviews (and great sales) are down to her. Thank you."
Michael Dylan
Crime author
"Working with Rebecca has been an absolute pleasure. She stays in contact, exudes enthusiasm, and has provided an insightful and detailed assessment of my manuscript — with pages of suggestions that I continue to work through as I edit my work. I would highly recommend her services."
Jo Dixon
Psychological / thriller author
"She is a thorough professional with more than just a fantastic eye for detail. She knows story, inside and out, and she utilizes her story sense unerringly in the single-minded goal of making your prose the very best it can be. A joy to work with, she makes everything she touches immeasurably better."
T.D. Donnelly
Thriller author / screenwriter
"I worked with Rebecca on the novel Angel Maker, and was drawn to her due to her experience with the genre, as well as her immediate enthusiasm for the project! It’s always great to work with someone that you feel, as a writer, is passionate about both their work, and the book they’re working on. With Rebecca, things felt easy…"
Morgan Greene
Crime fiction author
"I feel so lucky to have Rebecca. Her line and copy edit on my novel was detailed, comprehensive and exceeded my expectations. I’m only sorry I didn’t get Rebecca to do the developmental edit as well. I can highly recommend Rebecca Millar Editorial and will definitely use her for my next novel. "
Annette Leigh
Crime author

Editorial Services

How can I help you with  your next project?
Editing Services

Developmental Edit

Big-picture feedback focused on plot, structure, pacing and character development. Ideal for authors who want to strengthen the foundations of their story.

Editorial Assessment

An overview of your manuscript’s strengths and weaknesses, including plot, structure, character,  pacing  and genre expectations. Available at different levels depending on your needs.

Line Edit

A deep dive into your prose. This stylistic service focuses on style, flow, rhythm and clarity – helping your writing work as hard as possible while preserving your voice.

Copy Editing

Corrects grammar, spelling, punctuation, and usage. Also addresses consistency, accuracy, and sentence-level issues like repetition, clarity, and flow. 

Proofreading

The final polish before publication. Proofreading catches lingering typos, layout issues, or small errors introduced during typesetting or formatting.

Query Letter Review

Includes feedback on your query letter, synopsis, and opening chapters. I’ll help you present your work in the strongest possible light to agents and publishers.

Formatting

Clean, professional interior formatting for narrative manuscripts – ideal for indie authors preparing for publication on Kindle, print-on-demand, or ebook platforms.

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Let’s take your story to the next level.

Whether you’re polishing your final draft or still shaping your story, I offer expert, honest feedback to help you take the next step on your writing journey with confidence.

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